One key thing the meeting with Val has
allowed me to see the work from the position of other people
eyes and has let me look at my work a fresh. I feel that there
are more things that need to change. I was struck by the idea of
viewing distance, with this in mind I played a copy of my video
through my television and watched it from where I would normally view
the screen. I work using a fairly large screen and never see my work
at a distance. So thing that are small are easily seen, viewing thing
in ones living room I can see that small things are lost size can be
important.
New and Old Huts |
I have developed the the opening
sequence. The image on the right is my original shot. I feel the huts
are lost and to small I kept them at at that size because of the DNA
video it represented the same feel for me. However I have to
step out from that video to stamp my own look on the video. I know
that I have a tendency to not crop into an image and leave
everything in, by cropping into an image it can make it stronger. Its
what you leave out or imply that makes the image stronger. On that
bases cropping into the huts I feel makes the image stronger. I have made the the bike more complete rather than one wheel.
3D wheel |
During my class with Andrew he
suggested adding some shadows making the image more 3D. After some
experimentation we had a redesign of the Big Wheel. If anything it
confirmed that I wanted to go down the route of very flat images with
the hint of a postcard look.