Crit

Today we presented our work for the rest of the group to see. I had some positive feed back. Not everybody was keen on the music I had used my initial idea was to have an avant-guard jazz music however I have found none suitable. The lack of diversity was also highlighted. I shall endeavor to widen the types of hands used for the project. some felt that the pace was a bit labored in places and the poster introduced at the end need to have better differentiation between the text and the background images.